Hazel
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Hinata && Orion && Hook
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Post by Hazel on Feb 26, 2007 11:37:41 GMT -5
Don't turn away Don't give in to the pain Don't try to hide Though they're screaming your name Don't close your eyes God knows what lies behind them Don't turn out the light Never sleep, never die
Name: Hook
Age: 4 Years
Sex: Male
Breed: Timber Wolf
Height: Normal sized for his type
Lineage: Gabrielle (dam) and Bat (sire)
Offspring: None
Birth Alliance/ Current Alliance: Neutral
Physical Appearance:
Large, muscular bodice printed greys and blacks with slight white undertones stands upon four thick pillars, tipped in ivory. His tail, tipped back, stands high and proud over his back, and bright blue eyes glimmer out, for he is partly blind. Able only to see shadows, he relies very much on vibrations and smells. He is a handsom figure with large canines and pointed, black audes.
Persona:
Fierce at times, Hook is usualy bored or ignorant to most things. He isnt very terratorial and he doesnt give a damn about alliances. Though if he was to get up off his lazy ass and join, he would go for the lights. He belives in peace and sencerity (wel, he claims this, but realy he likes to sleep without being awoken up by fighting animals). But he is a good fighter, and everyone once in a while will join in. If annoyed, or picked on for either being lazy or part blind, he will react violantly and suddenly, a complete change from his lazy attitude.
Other: None
Sample Post:
Blinded since birth, cursed by lack of vision, yet gifted with exellent hearing and soft, tender pads, a lone brujo stood amongst the foliege, scenting the air carefully with his lifted, ebon snout. His grey pelt was mingled with black and white, giving him an elderly appearence. One would think that he was blind due to disease, they would assume he was weak and unable to fight. But he had hidden abilities. Though blind, he was tough and strong, a little thin but speedy, and able to see beyond his eyes. His 'third eye' was keen and presise. All animals had a third eyes on tier foreheads. Invisible, undetectable, but still there. But none used it. The pyscic muscle was delicate, and even a humans powerful mind was unable, usualy, to focus the third eyes, therefore unable to open the secrets within.
But Hook could.
His third eye - his mind, his hearing, his touch and his smell - had saved him on many occastions. Though blind, he knew he was in a forest, he knew where the trees where, and he knew how to evaded them with ease. Vibrations from his enviroment painted him a picture and his paws told him hos his footing was. His smell and hearing simply told him if another creature was close and what it was. But his hearing doubled as a defense system. Able to hear where wolves were and using vibrations, he could dodge attacks like any normal wolf could. If not for his bright, clouded blue eyes none would know he was blind. The fact that he had been in the same situation since birth helped, for he was able to practise since pup hood. He learned to hunt and to fight in his state. A wolf blinded in age would enver survive, and indeed, never fight, not like Hook could, anyway. Nicknamed 'Bat', Hook was a frightful opponant even to the boldest wolves. But of corse, he was still weak when against many wolves, or small wolves. A wolf who was light on his feet would make little noice and vibration so unlike anormal wolf, he was not afraid of larger wolves, but he was terrified of fierce, small animls. Especcialy foxes. They were near silent in padding, and poor Hook was easily surprised by them. But of corse, he never told anyone his weakness.
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Post by Grace on Feb 26, 2007 15:26:07 GMT -5
Accepted. Watch your typos there. The spell check is handy. ^^ Nice sample.
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